Zippy has decided to write book project Zippy needs help filling in the gaps of his grammar or lack there of, Zippy is a poor arse mofo, Zippy needs your halp!

I don't really want to post main story assets but character bios and descriptions I have no qualms posting, I have lost as much as I have currently that never helps but rethinking and refining scenario's not necessarily bad after hammering out a few paragraphs I have found I tend to meander and over state things.

Hammering out the core or flow of the page comes before polish and reworking but in order to polish I need to grasp grammar better, so I come here to you the and beseech the masters of "insert whatever here" to help zippy with this project.

PS:I thought a thread would be better than PMing some of you, since because as well know its more fun to be trashed in public than in private :D